hey. cheers for the feedback.
the mock up i posted was indeed a rough design. the actual text design is the design for the label. the arrangement as to placement on the tee has not been decided yet, and that is mainly their area. i was kinda wanting to have the tee quite minimalistic. something like this.
http://www.usc.co.uk/shop/product/zo...nt_id=0&sale=0
im also playing with the idea of warping the logo across one shoulder?
oh and as for the lettering design, it was meant to be like that, but i can see what you mean. i kinda wanted to get a disjointed feel, as you can see i kinda wanted to continue it with the 'P' and the 'I' but thought less maybe more. thanks for ur critique, your sharp.