indeed. her criticism is spot on.
break it down:
you've got your circles in the upper right, lower left, and center. you've got your worn script writing in the background, grunge brushes on the left and right, and little flourishes outwards from the text. oh and a fat stroke around the word.
while these are cool trends and effects, they aren't tied to the only content in there ("Heavenly Designs"). They can exist in any context and are unrelatable. Maybe that face is you, and that adds content too. but take Heavenly and take Designs and add elements from each and both of those to its surroundings.
hope that helps and isn't just a rehash of alyCe...
