I like the piece, but I'd actually rethink all the flies. The concept with the legs and wings on the eye is brilliant, but is completely lost because the focus is on the actual flies. Also, the flies, are they a brush or something? At closer inspection I saw that the three largest flies where actually the same. It doesn't matter with the smaller ones but it's quite easy to spot with the big and detailed ones. I do understand the concept of the flies and how they encircle the eye, leading the viewers eye but if you decide to have flies there, it should look like real flies that are standing on the skin. Personally I'd remove them and make the eye=fly (flye?) more prominent, because thats a more solid idea.
My two cents anyway
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