yeah, you've got 4 different fonts going on, and none of them really have anything to do with eachother. it makes for a disjointed piece...
are there often quotes on the front of a book? i mean, more than "Simply amazing..." or something short like that? If you like to keep that around, I'm not sure it's in the right spot. I read that before I read the title, and that's confusing.
also, what do the dots represent? anything?
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