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Old 02-22-2008, 05:00 PM   #3
Saywells
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it looks great. vivid colors, good slogan, cool picture.
a few things:
-where's the photo from? I'd probably airbrush out her navel tattoo.
-i can't read that clearly the vertical Flash text up by her dreads. it's white on white-ish, and very thin. not sure how you'd fix that--maybe you can put it in the purple section?

heh sorry, i know this is in the showcase section rather than critique, but hey, you asked!
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