Thread: My proposal ad
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Old 02-26-2008, 07:38 AM   #11
Aarlev
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I like the overall concept but I agree with the points made above. The outer glow is not great. It just makes it look like you had trouble cutting out the girl. Maybe spread/fade it a bit more so the edges aren't so hard.

Also the image of the girl itself seems a bit low on the quality side and really needs some more contrast. She doesn't really blend with the background. And I think the "flash" text should be placed somewhere else.

I agree with Arik on the hand as well. Would look better on top of the banner I think.

Good colors and the icons are great!
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