Thread: A good saying
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Old 03-04-2008, 01:35 PM   #4
alyCe
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Urm, it's all nice vector, but I just don't "feel it"
(oh, and by the way I'm probably gonna be widely hated for my critiques aren't I?)
It just lacks SOMETHING that gives a feel of the saying, I'm not feeling "alone" - I'm not feeling "drinking" - I'm feeling a vector-sun, a vector-beer and a vector-tableish thing. Some questions then, for you and me:

-What do you want to communicate with this?
-What choices did you make to communicate this?
-Why have you chosen the font you've used?

I suspect this isn't something you've thought properly through, but if you think about this and, if you want, make some changes it'll probably be a good exercise. And as you've put it in this section I guess you do want feedback =)


edit: darn!! This was in the showcase-phorum. Ohwell, if this is something you made just to pass time, and don't bother fixing/reflecting upon then ignore my post
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