There seems to be a lot going on in the middle of the page. Effects are kind of like fonts. If you start to use too many of them it turns into a circus poster. It's just difficult to see where the focus is supposed to be. You have a mixture of paint splatter, desaturation, trendy vector, and silk screen all on the same peace.
I would cut it down and see if you could make it a bit simpler. How big can you get that photo of him jumping? I think the most interesting part about that photo is his mouth screaming to the mic with those glasses. I would blow that up big and fill the whole poster.
Those are my comments and I hope they help inspire a few more versions. I don't know the artist but if I listened to his music I would probably get a better feel for his design.
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