i like that render - but the face looks a bit squashed to the right. plus the edged of the render to the face look a wee bit pixelated.
my suggestion is to try and make the image flow more - it could be something awesome with an extra bit of work! its already really cool.
Maybe try Babyface as the font. It should go quite well with the image.
good luck and I hope to see the final image!
adam
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