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infektsu · 05-16-2008, 05:39 PM

I critique hard, so sorry...haha

Anyways I don't really see how this could work for a t-shirt. Not exaclty the right kind of print for a shit design.

The text is a little hard to read with the color variations on white behind it (maybe a different type face would work better, something bolder).

Also not sure where the direction is coming from. Looks more like broken glass rather then the elements. The colors don't even match the elements. There are some blues, greens, and I guess brown. But nothing distinct (not sure if that's what you were going for).

Sorry if I seem harsh. Keep working.

05-16-2008, 05:39 PM	#2
infektsu Junior Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Tallahassee Posts: 161	I critique hard, so sorry...haha Anyways I don't really see how this could work for a t-shirt. Not exaclty the right kind of print for a shit design. The text is a little hard to read with the color variations on white behind it (maybe a different type face would work better, something bolder). Also not sure where the direction is coming from. Looks more like broken glass rather then the elements. The colors don't even match the elements. There are some blues, greens, and I guess brown. But nothing distinct (not sure if that's what you were going for). Sorry if I seem harsh. Keep working. __________________ INFECTING YOU ALL ONE AT A TIME ™ Portfolio (coming soon) \| Behance \| DeviantArt Last edited by infektsu : 05-16-2008 at 05:43 PM.