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Old 05-16-2008, 08:44 PM   #6
oktofu
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i would have to agree, i don't see how this would work as a t-shirt.

first of all, it is a lovely graphic, but it's more something you'd see on a poster or a web layout. the font you chose bothers me a little, there something about it that doesn't match well with the image.

i also think the graphic looks more like something sci-fi or something intergalactic than natural forms and elements. if you were to make a tshirt about the elements, perhaps choose something simple rather than going abstract.

were you planning on screen printing your t-shirts? it's best to put all colours on a seperate layer, and the more colours you choose the more it will cost you.

but i'll say it again, the graphic looks great, i wish i knew how to make things like that!
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