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Old 05-19-2008, 08:54 AM   #2
infektsu
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Nice work man. I'm seeing a few areas where you can work on blending people into the designs better. Other than that though, pretty cool. Do you have anything other than flyers to show?

Edit: Didn't realize you posted this in the critique section So I'm going to critique.

I'd work on your typography some. I know you have to fit a lot of information on these, but a lot of the type is really tight and kind of hard to read. And again with the blending. Seems like a lot of the "models" have too much of a feathered edge and some unnatural looking shadows.

You should take pictures of some of these printed and post it.
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