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meeko311 · 01-08-2008, 02:40 PM

I agree with what's been said mostly. I think the logo has good potential. Great start. My suggestion would be to create a tighter mock up in Illustrator and post that, and I would like to see what it would look like as a tight B/W & a color mock.

I know it's just a sketch...but maybe play with the spacing between 'f' & 'e'. At first glance my eyes almost want to read it as 'Inf' then 'ek' then 'tsu' as individuals even though I can clearly tell they are part of the same type family. Also maybe try to shorten the 'K' and bring the 't' in closer to make it flow better. Maybe even try connecting the 'k' & 't' the same way you connected the 'e' to the 'k'

Just a thought. Hope you follow up with posts on this logo. I would like to see a final version.

- CM

01-08-2008, 02:40 PM	#22
meeko311 Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Indianapolis Posts: 23	Logo I agree with what's been said mostly. I think the logo has good potential. Great start. My suggestion would be to create a tighter mock up in Illustrator and post that, and I would like to see what it would look like as a tight B/W & a color mock. I know it's just a sketch...but maybe play with the spacing between 'f' & 'e'. At first glance my eyes almost want to read it as 'Inf' then 'ek' then 'tsu' as individuals even though I can clearly tell they are part of the same type family. Also maybe try to shorten the 'K' and bring the 't' in closer to make it flow better. Maybe even try connecting the 'k' & 't' the same way you connected the 'e' to the 'k' Just a thought. Hope you follow up with posts on this logo. I would like to see a final version. - CM