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Old 06-04-2008, 02:55 PM   #1
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Client: RK
Type: Logo
Objective: Design a typeface to be used on shirt design.







Any comments, feedback, or suggestions would be appreciated. I take any type of criticism so fire away.

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-I feel that it is missing something that brings it all together. Any suggestions?
-Next step is to convert from hand sketch to an illustration, which should be fun, gulp.
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Old 06-04-2008, 03:23 PM   #2
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You are on to something. make it in illustrator, and smooth out the lines and take a look at where the K where the two diagonal lines meet, something funny there,

a good sketch
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Old 06-04-2008, 06:47 PM   #3
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Looks great so far, i look forward to seeing the final result!
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Old 06-04-2008, 09:59 PM   #4
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looks tight cant wait to see when your done
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Old 06-04-2008, 10:32 PM   #5
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I like how it all rites together, but you can still read it. Nice job!
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Old 06-04-2008, 11:47 PM   #6
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I think it looks really good. I keep thinking the top right portion of the K is a 7 though. other than that i love the way the R slides in front
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Old 06-05-2008, 01:50 AM   #7
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Looks really nice! For some reason I am really not liking the solid color (third image) but with just a thing stroke (first image) it really pops! Can't wait to see the final!
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