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Old 06-30-2008, 08:47 PM   #11
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clothing line..... thanks alyce i think it looks better spelled out to and more legiable

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Old 07-01-2008, 10:37 PM   #12
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Old 07-02-2008, 12:10 AM   #13
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Well did,but coun't see the tag line...
Bit tough to read
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Old 07-16-2008, 01:23 PM   #14
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#1 to messy looks unfinished

#2 is much better
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Old 07-16-2008, 01:57 PM   #15
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Yeah, you defenitely have something nice going with that second one there. Try using it on a different color too, that yellow is really bright!
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Yeah, you defenitely have something nice going with that second one there. Try using it on a different color too, that yellow is really bright!
(just so that it has been said, that does not mean "use a darker yellow" - they tend to look dirty and yucky)
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