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Freelancer
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Aight guys. You've all seen my flyers. & this is my
first. FIRST. Attempt in the mixtape world. Please be critical, I really want to know what to work on & all that jazzzzz... NOTE: This isn't the real single cover, just a practice cover. I chose to use Wiz since he's my boy, plus his new single just came out & I've been trying to get his DJ to talk to his management to let me do his marketing/covers. Original Wiz Image: http://wizkhalifa.com/sites/wizkhali...wizimage02.jpg ![]()
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 360
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It's different, that's for sure. The text at the bottom, I will say, isn't very readable. Maybe make it more solid. I'd have to hear the music though to see how this cover fits. As a composition though, its cool.
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Freelancer
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Thanks for the feedback leftover.. The "for promotional use only" text is very unimportant and isn't supposed to standout, just has to be there for copyright reasons.
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 258
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as always, it looks good. but this time I something bugs me. the NEW HIT SINGLE text is wrong, I think it's to big. and the star does not blend in well. the "primo pro..." on the top is too far on the top, put it with the same distance as the "for promo use only" is from the edge. the rest I think is good looking
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Web/Instructional Design
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Honolulu, HI
Posts: 1
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I totally agree with the last comment. Increase the size of the black box around "New hit single", drop the text at the top of the page to at least as far as the bottom text is. Otherwise, looks very great and interesting. I love the layers and the choice of colors, reds and oranges, from the original purple.
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Designer
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 25
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yep and drop the single wtc tower. use the chrysler building or empire state instead...
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Super Moderator
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Norway
Posts: 709
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hahaha, did not notice that XD hillarious
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