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Old 07-30-2008, 02:17 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Wiz Khalifa - Make It Hot!

Aight guys. You've all seen my flyers. & this is my
first. FIRST. Attempt in the mixtape world. Please
be critical, I really want to know what to work on &
all that jazzzzz...

NOTE: This isn't the real single cover, just a practice cover.
I chose to use Wiz since he's my boy, plus his new single just
came out & I've been trying to get his DJ to talk to his management
to let me do his marketing/covers.

Original Wiz Image:
http://wizkhalifa.com/sites/wizkhali...wizimage02.jpg

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Old 07-30-2008, 03:27 PM   #2
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It's different, that's for sure. The text at the bottom, I will say, isn't very readable. Maybe make it more solid. I'd have to hear the music though to see how this cover fits. As a composition though, its cool.
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Old 07-31-2008, 12:39 AM   #3
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Thanks for the feedback leftover.. The "for promotional use only" text is very unimportant and isn't supposed to standout, just has to be there for copyright reasons.
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Old 08-01-2008, 03:44 AM   #4
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as always, it looks good. but this time I something bugs me. the NEW HIT SINGLE text is wrong, I think it's to big. and the star does not blend in well. the "primo pro..." on the top is too far on the top, put it with the same distance as the "for promo use only" is from the edge. the rest I think is good looking
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Old 08-22-2008, 03:19 AM   #5
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I totally agree with the last comment. Increase the size of the black box around "New hit single", drop the text at the top of the page to at least as far as the bottom text is. Otherwise, looks very great and interesting. I love the layers and the choice of colors, reds and oranges, from the original purple.
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Old 08-22-2008, 07:47 AM   #6
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yep and drop the single wtc tower. use the chrysler building or empire state instead...
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Old 08-22-2008, 06:21 PM   #7
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yep and drop the single wtc tower. use the chrysler building or empire state instead...
hahaha, did not notice that XD hillarious
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