Logo Crit

Echo Around Town · 08-12-2008, 08:53 PM

This was done for a fashion designer please tell me what you think and be honest

Uzi Levitovitch · 08-13-2008, 10:56 AM

I think that you should add some background and change the small letters.

BlackBirdDesign · 08-13-2008, 11:09 AM

I agree with Uzi. The really fancy first letters and then the slightly not quite as fancy other letters don't really go. It's like chocolate and popsicles: they're both good on their own, but together not so much. And a background, maybe some sort of design under the letters. Schnaps, I just said what Uzi said except with more words. Oh well. The (wo)man knows his/her stuff.

Staur · 08-20-2008, 09:05 AM

I dont think you can put a background on a logo, so I wouldent do that. anyways I think that the S and the M don't fit, looks like they dont belong, they need to be more weldet in to the rest of the words.

BlackBirdDesign · 08-21-2008, 01:53 PM

By background, I (we?) mean like something under the letters. Like a light gray design (3 parallel thick-in-the-middle lines sort of thing?)

alyCe · 08-21-2008, 05:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlackBirdDesign

By background, I (we?) mean like something under the letters. Like a light gray design (3 parallel thick-in-the-middle lines sort of thing?)

still, it's a logo, not a "design", simple does it

My grief with the mix of letters is that the first letters (the fancy ones) are bigger, and (should be) more prominent, but the weight is thinner than the other characters and therefore they drown, it's like a sportscar next to a bulldozer. You SHOULD be looking at the sportscar but the bulldozer just out-weights it

Justin · 08-21-2008, 05:57 PM

Adding more weight to the S&M type might help it blend together.

Phantasmagoria · 08-24-2008, 01:44 AM

The fancy letters are too inferior compared to the rest of them. Lack of balance I feel. Maybe you can play around with fonts and weight of font.

fullofebak · 09-02-2008, 01:18 PM

maybe try playing around with the over-all size of the s and m? or perhaps making the unfancy letters a smaller font.or have another element so that the logo is not pure text?

08-12-2008, 08:53 PM	#1
Echo Around Town Intern Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 23	Logo Crit This was done for a fashion designer please tell me what you think and be honest

08-13-2008, 10:56 AM	#2
Uzi Levitovitch Intern Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1	Nice I think that you should add some background and change the small letters. __________________ Free website templates - http://www.freetemplatesdirect.com

08-20-2008, 09:05 AM	#4
Staur Senior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 258	I dont think you can put a background on a logo, so I wouldent do that. anyways I think that the S and the M don't fit, looks like they dont belong, they need to be more weldet in to the rest of the words. __________________ Peace

08-21-2008, 05:57 PM	#7
Justin Designer Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 31	Adding more weight to the S&M type might help it blend together. __________________ Torched Blog Camera Gear: D2xs / D70; Nikkor: 18-200mm, 12-24mm, 70-200mm, 18-70mm, 70-300mm, & 50mm.

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08-13-2008, 11:09 AM	#3
BlackBirdDesign Intern Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 22	I agree with Uzi. The really fancy first letters and then the slightly not quite as fancy other letters don't really go. It's like chocolate and popsicles: they're both good on their own, but together not so much. And a background, maybe some sort of design under the letters. Schnaps, I just said what Uzi said except with more words. Oh well. The (wo)man knows his/her stuff.

08-21-2008, 01:53 PM	#5
BlackBirdDesign Intern Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 22	By background, I (we?) mean like something under the letters. Like a light gray design (3 parallel thick-in-the-middle lines sort of thing?)

08-24-2008, 01:44 AM	#8
Phantasmagoria Photomanipulator Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 129	The fancy letters are too inferior compared to the rest of them. Lack of balance I feel. Maybe you can play around with fonts and weight of font.

09-02-2008, 01:18 PM	#9
fullofebak Intern Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 8	maybe try playing around with the over-all size of the s and m? or perhaps making the unfancy letters a smaller font.or have another element so that the logo is not pure text?