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Old 08-14-2008, 10:46 PM   #1
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I've been working on version 2 of my football site, Juvenorge.com, for quite some time. Now it's finished! What do you think of it? Anything you would've changed? Bad coding? Tell me. I would as much feedback as possible.

Url: Juvenorge.com V2
Old: Juvenorge.com v1 (Current version)

Take into consideration that this is still the development version. Text is just random Lorem Ipsum and links doesen't go anywhere of course.

Thanks for all replies!
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Old 08-14-2008, 11:45 PM   #2
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looks good, I like the structure of the content.
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Old 08-15-2008, 10:57 PM   #3
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Thanks for the feedback, Jewlz. Anyone else?
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Old 08-17-2008, 10:01 AM   #4
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Lol norsk


I like v2 quite well, but I hate the banner. It gives it an amateur-ish feel.
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Old 08-17-2008, 10:19 AM   #5
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I think v2 looks great, but your site is already bordered - confied to the box that... well, contains it. Which is not a bad thing of course, but your header does not, at all fit into the box, it just floats up there. Either you should make it a more exhiting graphics that goes around the top of the box, or make the header bordered so that it connects with the box.

if that made any sense
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Old 08-17-2008, 04:23 PM   #6
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what if the navigation links were incorporated into the header as white text? do you think that would ground things a bit?
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Old 08-19-2008, 06:35 AM   #7
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I like the design just not sure about the three column layout. It may help to create more of a focal point on the content.
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Old 08-24-2008, 01:36 AM   #8
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The layout is fine but maybe you can work on the banner.
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