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Old 01-11-2008, 12:30 PM   #1
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Hi All!

Thought I'd post another ad I produced with my collaborator Bill Simone (photographer). Oh, and I can't be held responsible for the company logo—that was supplied by the client.

Have a splendid day everyone!

Side note: The spaghetti-covered child is his grandson.
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Old 01-11-2008, 12:49 PM   #2
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I like this one a lot i think is has a clear message and its targeted well towards families. I think most families with kids see this as a familiar image as well and its always good to stir up familiar feelings in people as long as they are good ones!
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Old 01-11-2008, 12:49 PM   #3
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Love the ad! Great concept and execution. Especially the "Meee-baws"--minimal, yet VERY effective copy that says it all in two (nonsense) words.

I think "no preservatives added" in the footer should be hyphenated. Maybe the "all natural" as well. (Not that that has anything to do with the graphics)

Excellent work!
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Thanks for the kind words folks!
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