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Old 01-12-2008, 10:28 PM   #1
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i'm designing a logo for a real estate agent's group. see below for my first set of concepts. these are the hifi designs, of which once settled upon will derive a simple 2-color version. luckily these all appear to be adaptable to B&W.

which do you like the best? does the first one make sense to you?
thanks for any input!!

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Old 01-12-2008, 11:31 PM   #2
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My vote would be number 3, I would also reduce the text under the symbol a bit it seems a little too big compared to the orb.
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Old 01-14-2008, 05:42 AM   #3
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I like the 1st one a lot but the 3rd one is my favorite as well. I like the overall design and the way the "C" makes out the middle part of the "E". It looks very business like and suits a real estate agent very well I think. I agree with Gino on the text size though. Maybe reduce it slightly and then I think you have a great logo there.
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Old 01-14-2008, 06:05 AM   #4
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What about the first one without the overall circle, which would allow the top line to run off the top of the logo?

Great designs overall
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Old 01-14-2008, 11:56 AM   #5
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My vote would be number 3, I would also reduce the text under the symbol a bit it seems a little too big compared to the orb.
Agree! The text is a bit too big therefore its competing with the orb. I also really like the second logo. You might try it with solid colors instead of the gradient and maybe a different font for the text.
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Old 01-14-2008, 12:46 PM   #6
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I think the first one would be better without the circle . . . it seems too constricted, to me . . . and it looks like it was thrown in as an afterthought. It's a solid logo without it.

I like the use of would-be negative space in the second one . . . it makes you look into it a little more, holds your interest. I agree that a change in the font might be in order--something that would make for more interesting negative spaces (we've all heard about the arrow in FedEx)

The third one, though, is my favorite. I agree that the size ratio needs some tweaking, but I'm loving how clean and professional (yet not boring) it is. I bet the client would go for this one based solely on that.

Great job overall!
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Old 01-16-2008, 12:45 PM   #7
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#3 for me.

With the changes that others have stated already (i.e. reducing the font size of the text underneath)

With whichever you decide, be sure to try a B&W as well as different sizes to make sure the logo will work well on a variety of different things.

Thanks for sharing your logo,
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Old 01-18-2008, 11:05 AM   #8
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I like the third the most. It look really cool . Try to add a bit more effect on the text and you've got yourself a great logo there . The first one doesn't seem to be much of a big deal. It's missing something. It's like the text and the circle from behind are not linked.
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Old 01-18-2008, 02:20 PM   #9
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I'd say either number 3 or number one without the circle and effects
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Old 01-21-2008, 01:58 AM   #10
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I Liked the first , and you may delete the overall circle and the second part of it, so if u can just keep the text and the first part of the logo, just try it.
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