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Old 02-02-2008, 08:57 AM   #1
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My first signature.. I never maid one so i'm not that good at it .. Please critique my sig .

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Old 02-02-2008, 10:21 AM   #2
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Looks good my only comment is that spider man is a little hard to read and maybe could be a tiny bit bigger.
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Old 02-02-2008, 10:35 AM   #3
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Yeah I like it, But like Gino said moving "Spideman" would make it better to read.
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Old 02-02-2008, 11:34 AM   #4
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Very Nice For Your First!!!!

Moving Spiderman a bit and enlarging would help as the others said.

You might want to change the font of SPIDERMAN as well

But other than that GOODJOB

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Old 02-02-2008, 11:50 AM   #5
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I made 2 one with bigger text like that one before and one with the original Spiderman text so tell me which one u like it more ?

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Old 02-02-2008, 12:11 PM   #6
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I like the second thumbnail image to be honest. Text is SPIDERMAN text so it obviously works haha. But it is the right size. One thing that could help would be darkening the Spiderman text a tad bit. Other than that. Pretty good

Keep up the good work.

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Old 02-02-2008, 02:04 PM   #7
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Get rid of your name on the sig. It makes it look tacky TBH. And work on text placement. Other than that its pretty good for a first sig. My first sig was garbage compared to this.
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Old 02-02-2008, 02:11 PM   #8
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wow i really like that

and id prefer the second one
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Old 02-03-2008, 10:06 AM   #9
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Tnx to all ^^ i think the second is best so second signature wins.
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Old 02-07-2008, 02:43 AM   #10
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Wow for a first signature that's really good. I can remember back when I made my first and let's just say it wasn't that good :P

You've done an excellent job of cutting spiderman out. My only advice would to maybe make your name a little bigger, afterall it is your signature and the focus should be on your name

Keep up the good work
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