Critique on sketch. - Page 2

Sono Juventino · 02-11-2008, 03:39 AM

Yeah. I was working on this last night, so I really put more effort into the basic look than to the details. I think the standard black/white combination fits the header perfectly. I'm thinking about puttin in some javascript, showing the text first when you press the headlines like About and Contact information in the top.

the footer will be added soon, but I really diden't put any effort into that yesterday. I'm thinking about putting in a flikr-gallery or a last.fm-gallery at the right hand side to personalise the look of the site. Maybe add a background-color or a slight gradient as you said Gino.

I love doing black, but It's maybe the color that is hardest to get just right.

Sono Juventino · 02-11-2008, 04:56 PM

Update: http://2dropsdesign.com/bilder/delta.png

Sono Juventino · 02-12-2008, 02:25 AM

Sorry for not giving any information. Posted in a hurry last night.

I feel this Sketch has better colours. I added a small gradient to the top and made the background-color off-white. Then I tried to balance the colors. The black/grat combo at the "would this please you" section was a little to dark.

The design feels a little left-aligned, but I will work on that when i come home. I've added more content and feels that thinks begins to feel right now.

Would've loved so more critiques. This sketch has deleloped a great deal since it first was published.

Thanks.

Sono Juventino · 02-12-2008, 12:31 PM

MediaMisfit · 02-21-2008, 11:28 AM

Just another quick thought on the IA.

02-11-2008, 03:39 AM	#11
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	Yeah. I was working on this last night, so I really put more effort into the basic look than to the details. I think the standard black/white combination fits the header perfectly. I'm thinking about puttin in some javascript, showing the text first when you press the headlines like About and Contact information in the top. the footer will be added soon, but I really diden't put any effort into that yesterday. I'm thinking about putting in a flikr-gallery or a last.fm-gallery at the right hand side to personalise the look of the site. Maybe add a background-color or a slight gradient as you said Gino. I love doing black, but It's maybe the color that is hardest to get just right. __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

02-11-2008, 04:56 PM	#12
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	Update: http://2dropsdesign.com/bilder/delta.png __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

02-12-2008, 02:25 AM	#13
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	Sorry for not giving any information. Posted in a hurry last night. I feel this Sketch has better colours. I added a small gradient to the top and made the background-color off-white. Then I tried to balance the colors. The black/grat combo at the "would this please you" section was a little to dark. The design feels a little left-aligned, but I will work on that when i come home. I've added more content and feels that thinks begins to feel right now. Would've loved so more critiques. This sketch has deleloped a great deal since it first was published. Thanks. __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

02-12-2008, 12:31 PM	#14
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	__________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

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