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designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Kirchbach, Graz (A)
Posts: 31
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Hey guys, my first post here...
ok, spam it *g* ![]() ![]() hope you like it |
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 255
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nice work.
I wonder if it would been better not to have the dotted lines around he D and the P, just a thought |
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designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Kirchbach, Graz (A)
Posts: 31
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oh, i thanks they really look bad...
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Super Moderator
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Norway
Posts: 693
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I think you should try to put -aradise closer to the P, they look a little disjointed, else than that it looks fab
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Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 50
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I agree with alyCe you could try to bring the P in closer, but all in all I think the design is very good.
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Super Moderator
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The way you positioned the text with the 3d object and used a slight shadow, it really gives it depth. Personally, I really like this piece. Like alyCe said, the P should be a bit closer. I think the dotted lines around just the D and P looks fine. Great Work!
7/10 ~chris |
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