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Old 02-11-2008, 05:00 AM   #1
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Old 02-11-2008, 05:41 AM   #2
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nice work.
I wonder if it would been better not to have the dotted lines around he D and the P, just a thought
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Old 02-11-2008, 06:28 AM   #3
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oh, i thanks they really look bad...
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Old 02-11-2008, 08:46 AM   #4
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I think you should try to put -aradise closer to the P, they look a little disjointed, else than that it looks fab
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Old 02-11-2008, 09:30 AM   #5
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I agree with alyCe you could try to bring the P in closer, but all in all I think the design is very good.
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Old 02-11-2008, 10:34 AM   #6
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The way you positioned the text with the 3d object and used a slight shadow, it really gives it depth. Personally, I really like this piece. Like alyCe said, the P should be a bit closer. I think the dotted lines around just the D and P looks fine. Great Work!

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