What do you think?

Alex · 02-23-2008, 12:19 AM

I just finished my business card and I was wondering what you guys thought of it. Here it is

And if you guys could tell me what you thought of my 'Illustration' set which is here, would be awesome

Gino · 02-23-2008, 12:36 AM

I would ditch the outer glow on the text and also the back of the card is all nice and aligned but the front forms a diagonal. Id make the front text all flush on the left side.

Also not sure about the red and yellow colors, Maybe you could try some other colors.

Saywells · 02-25-2008, 02:40 PM

yeah, the justification of the text on the front is awkward. either square it off (make "Posters..." and "Brochures..." the same length as Visual Solutions) or left-justified.
Also I think your yellow text: "visual problem-solver" is redundant and unnecessary, if you're business name is Visual Solutions.

I'm also not so keen on the outer glow behind the V & S. you could probably do some more with the company name text, to make it pop instead of a blending effect like that.

02-23-2008, 12:19 AM	#1
Alex Intern Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 6	What do you think? I just finished my business card and I was wondering what you guys thought of it. Here it is And if you guys could tell me what you thought of my 'Illustration' set which is here, would be awesome __________________ My Flikr profile \|\| I'm looking for work, so if you have something, just drop me a line

02-23-2008, 12:36 AM	#2
Gino Administrator/Founder Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 1,034	I would ditch the outer glow on the text and also the back of the card is all nice and aligned but the front forms a diagonal. Id make the front text all flush on the left side. Also not sure about the red and yellow colors, Maybe you could try some other colors. __________________ Free Business Cards // T Shirts Blog // How to Start A Clothing Line

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02-25-2008, 02:40 PM	#3
Saywells on Main Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 101	yeah, the justification of the text on the front is awkward. either square it off (make "Posters..." and "Brochures..." the same length as Visual Solutions) or left-justified. Also I think your yellow text: "visual problem-solver" is redundant and unnecessary, if you're business name is Visual Solutions. I'm also not so keen on the outer glow behind the V & S. you could probably do some more with the company name text, to make it pop instead of a blending effect like that.