2Dropsdesign - Updated version

Sono Juventino · 02-24-2008, 11:22 AM

Hello again. Thanks to everyone that commented on my last sketch.
I've edited my design a lot, so I feel it's better to get some fresh views on this one:

Link to sketch

Thanks in advance.

Arik · 02-24-2008, 12:37 PM

That looks very nice. Perhaps change 'recently listened tracks' to 'recently played tracks', it sounds nicer. Then I don't really know if the seperator between the footer and the Most popular / Recent comments / About is really that necessary.

Gino · 02-24-2008, 01:55 PM

Looks really nice, I'm not sure about the bullet points in the footer though cause they throw the justification off. I look forward to seeing this live!

Sono Juventino · 02-24-2008, 02:42 PM

You might be onto something there Gino. I've struggled a bit to get the footer just right.

I think i'll try to reduce the contrast in colors between the separators and the footer, but I think they look nice. They're making the layout somewhat tighter.

I'm also a bit uncertant about the Recent project-thing. It may look to similar to the content underneath. I'll come with an update soon. Thanks everyone..

Sono Juventino · 02-24-2008, 04:16 PM

Ok. More work done. I can't edit my posts, sorry about that. I'll just add the new image in this post.

- Sketch #1
- Sketch #2 (Newest)

Changes:
- There are blue, brown and grey strokes outlining the page. This is from PS function strokes, and were edited in the last version. They'll be removed in the final version.
- Removed bullets in footer
- Reduced the opacity on the line in footer
- Removed some pixels at the right hand side.
- More defined patterns in the header
- Fixed the position of Recently listened tracks.
- Listened tracks changed to played tracks.
- Small adjustments at the position on the logo and the menu in the header.

Thanks everyone..

Sono Juventino · 03-07-2008, 04:42 PM

I have done a lot of changes due to critiques from another community. I hope this is an improvment.

Changes:
- Placed the meny underneath the header.
- Placed a contact drop-down-section in the header.
- Changed the layout
- Decreased the footer height due to less information.
- Changed the background colors.

What do you think about it?

Sono Juventino · 03-08-2008, 08:50 AM

No one?

Gino · 03-08-2008, 10:28 AM

I think the improvements look really solid!

Sono Juventino · 03-08-2008, 12:21 PM

Thank you very much, Gino. This is the first version I can really relate to. I think it is just about the details right now. Any recomendations for improvments, folks?

I'm not pleased with the link-color (The blue at right hand side) and I think I'll have to get the middle content just nailed. I feels a little bit too random now. Agree?

Hoping for more reviews!

MediaMisfit · 03-09-2008, 08:36 PM

Wow this is really coming along. Nice IA on the last screen cap. I'm glad your trying a lot of different ideas out. It'll be awesome whenever it is finish.

I really liked the lower section on sketch 2. I hope you decide to keep it.

02-24-2008, 01:55 PM	#3
Gino Administrator/Founder Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 1,034	Looks really nice, I'm not sure about the bullet points in the footer though cause they throw the justification off. I look forward to seeing this live! __________________ Free Business Cards // T Shirts Blog // How to Start A Clothing Line

02-24-2008, 02:42 PM	#4
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	You might be onto something there Gino. I've struggled a bit to get the footer just right. I think i'll try to reduce the contrast in colors between the separators and the footer, but I think they look nice. They're making the layout somewhat tighter. I'm also a bit uncertant about the Recent project-thing. It may look to similar to the content underneath. I'll come with an update soon. Thanks everyone.. __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

02-24-2008, 04:16 PM	#5
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	Ok. More work done. I can't edit my posts, sorry about that. I'll just add the new image in this post. - Sketch #1 - Sketch #2 (Newest) Changes: - There are blue, brown and grey strokes outlining the page. This is from PS function strokes, and were edited in the last version. They'll be removed in the final version. - Removed bullets in footer - Reduced the opacity on the line in footer - Removed some pixels at the right hand side. - More defined patterns in the header - Fixed the position of Recently listened tracks. - Listened tracks changed to played tracks. - Small adjustments at the position on the logo and the menu in the header. Thanks everyone.. __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

03-07-2008, 04:42 PM	#6
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	I have done a lot of changes due to critiques from another community. I hope this is an improvment. Changes: - Placed the meny underneath the header. - Placed a contact drop-down-section in the header. - Changed the layout - Decreased the footer height due to less information. - Changed the background colors. What do you think about it? __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

03-08-2008, 08:50 AM	#7
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	No one? __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)


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02-24-2008, 11:22 AM	#1
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	2Dropsdesign - Updated version Hello again. Thanks to everyone that commented on my last sketch. I've edited my design a lot, so I feel it's better to get some fresh views on this one: Link to sketch Thanks in advance. __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

02-24-2008, 12:37 PM	#2
Arik Intern Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 22	That looks very nice. Perhaps change 'recently listened tracks' to 'recently played tracks', it sounds nicer. Then I don't really know if the seperator between the footer and the Most popular / Recent comments / About is really that necessary.

03-08-2008, 10:28 AM	#8
Gino Administrator/Founder Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 1,034	I think the improvements look really solid! __________________ Free Business Cards // T Shirts Blog // How to Start A Clothing Line

03-08-2008, 12:21 PM	#9
Sono Juventino Football geek Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 124	Thank you very much, Gino. This is the first version I can really relate to. I think it is just about the details right now. Any recomendations for improvments, folks? I'm not pleased with the link-color (The blue at right hand side) and I think I'll have to get the middle content just nailed. I feels a little bit too random now. Agree? Hoping for more reviews! __________________ http://juvenorge.com \| Personal site (Comming soon)

03-09-2008, 08:36 PM	#10
MediaMisfit Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 78	Wow this is really coming along. Nice IA on the last screen cap. I'm glad your trying a lot of different ideas out. It'll be awesome whenever it is finish. I really liked the lower section on sketch 2. I hope you decide to keep it.

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