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Old 03-02-2008, 03:39 PM   #1
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Yeah.. So; i was bored last night, and i did a gig poster for a band called (very creative): BLAH.
What d'ya think? And, more importantly, what do you think i can do better?
- The background picture is from http://www.bittbox.com/page/7/
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Old 03-02-2008, 04:04 PM   #2
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Try and fit in real text so it looks more real and maybe use more color
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Old 03-02-2008, 04:25 PM   #3
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Try and fit in real text so it looks more real and maybe use more color
Yeah, about the color. What colors? I actually tried, but didn't really succed, so i just stuck with the white.
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Old 03-02-2008, 04:29 PM   #4
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I'm not sure research some other grunge designs for inspiration =)
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That's a pretty good idea
Thanks
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Old 03-02-2008, 05:02 PM   #6
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How about now?
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Old 03-02-2008, 05:19 PM   #7
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I think the green is too bright

I actually liked the white better, but that is just my opinion.

Experiment with different colors and repost if you wish.

Hope this helps...

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Old 03-02-2008, 06:43 PM   #8
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I agree with chris
nice design, liked the gitar

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Old 03-03-2008, 08:24 AM   #9
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Ok, so i have these four by now. What do you think?
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Old 03-03-2008, 08:36 AM   #10
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the blue and the brown ones are pretty cool, but i would do some more details to the hole thing...
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