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03-09-2008, 01:03 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 258
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My logo
Hi guys
what do you think about my logo?? it is just my initials (F.S) nothing more. how can i improve it?? peace |
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03-09-2008, 02:54 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Los Angeles
Posts: 55
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The logo isn't bad, but think of something besides "graphic designer" for the text.
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03-09-2008, 05:00 PM
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Super Moderator
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Norway
Posts: 709
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The F eats the S pretty much totally up. And could you post this on a white background?
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03-09-2008, 05:41 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 258
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the graphic designer is for my card not the logo.
peace |
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03-09-2008, 07:21 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 78
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It looks like a bunker on the beach of Normandy or a robot helmet. I would try somet different designs just to see what else you can come up with.
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03-10-2008, 09:41 AM
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Gun for Hire
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Manchester
Posts: 18
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I like the simplicity, and it will work when scaled such as in use as an .ico for a website. It is lacking something as a graphical representation of your work as a whole, however. Apologies I don't have more of an opinion in this matter, I can't seem to put my finger on what's lacking and the only thing that really comes to mind is that the colour choices aren't particularly striking...
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03-10-2008, 12:37 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 26
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Reminds me very much of the StumbleUpon logo - but what makes that logo work is its depth and vibrancy. At the moment yours looks very plain.
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03-10-2008, 02:34 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 258
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I can agree that it kind a missing something, but I cant figure out what, thats why I posted it in this forum, I can try with gradients, but im not a fan of gradients in logos.
any other suggestions?? peace |
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03-11-2008, 03:22 AM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Oslo, Norway
Posts: 313
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You should never use gradients in logos, ever
 At least that's what the textbook says :PIm thinking it would look better with a stroke around the circle, in some color, the circle being white, and the FS being the same color as the stroke... Let me know if you didn't understand that and I'll make a quick sketch to show you :P
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03-11-2008, 03:53 AM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
Posts: 258
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yo Michae
this is i got what you were saying. pluss i made some other examples aswell.. did I get it right? what do you think peace |
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