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Old 03-23-2008, 04:40 PM   #1
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Hey, comments please. Iv sold one so far, lol.
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Old 03-23-2008, 04:46 PM   #2
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I don't know why, but it gives me a very "corporate" feel to this design. Maybe its the colors and the arrows.
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Old 03-23-2008, 05:33 PM   #3
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I'm not sure about the arm-pit arrows, the rest for the design is good. but I would have some other design elements insted of the arm-pit arrows. I like the color theme.
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Old 03-23-2008, 06:00 PM   #4
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hmm.. how about taking out the arrows then leaving the stars. do u think that would go better?

i dont see how it could be corporate?
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Old 03-23-2008, 08:45 PM   #5
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I like it althought yellow isnt my colour, I like the idea if fitted on a body properly it works even better
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Old 03-24-2008, 03:43 AM   #6
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I cant see any stars, all I see is arrows. so if you take away the arrows you got a black tee
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Old 03-24-2008, 03:49 PM   #7
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yeah i don't see any stars either.

i like the color palette, but it kinda says "look at my face! now look at my butt."


also the arrows don't match in style. the ones at the bottom are round, while the bigger ones are pointy.
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Old 03-24-2008, 04:20 PM   #8
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my bad. there are no stars. i did have stars on it earlier, hence the confusion in my mind lol.
anyways, umm.. i get ur message i didnt fancy leaving that message. lol.

i wanted to give the idea of movement.. 'to infinity'. the clothing label im working on.

il try it again without the corner arrows
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Old 03-24-2008, 05:44 PM   #9
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my point is that I would have other design elements then just the arrows. I see that you want the idea of movement.. 'to infinity'. and thats cool. but there are other ways of doing this with out arrows.
but keep me updated..
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