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Old 03-25-2008, 03:02 PM   #1
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Default logo im doing for a client. [UPDATED VERSION]

i cannot figure out how to post new pictures in with a reply so il start a new thread.

the client is very happy with this attempt, but wishes to have his name put somewhere in the design. the only place i could fit 2 words is possibly on the 2 speakers! is this plausible??

could you please give me some advice, on what i can do to implement this or even make it better as a a whole?

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Old 03-25-2008, 03:20 PM   #2
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Click "Post Reply" on the bottom right, instead of Quick Reply to fit in a new image attachment.

The design looks much better than your previous post, but i think the speakers may need a little more work... can't really say how, but that it looks more like a ring around a cone than a speaker.

i think adding text on top of those speakers is a bad idea. it would clutter the whole thing. questioning the purpose of the guy adding his name onto a BUSINESS design is another topic
but if you have to add it, i'd say put it on either side of the top stars.

what resolution are you working at? Is this in vector format? The TribeVibes text is really pixellated, and the stars are really rough-edged.
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Old 03-25-2008, 03:21 PM   #3
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Speakers and stars are too much. The font is all over the place. Try to some a tribal design would be cool and may give it an instant association.
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Old 03-25-2008, 03:41 PM   #4
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all of the design is in photoshop as my illustrator is playing up
anyway,

to:mediamisfit - what the client says goes. he likes the design.

to:saywells - i will try at the side of the stars. and to attempt to get my illustrator fixed.

i will post back in a few hours
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Old 03-25-2008, 04:22 PM   #5
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I like it, just needs something more, something with the speakers maybe
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