first time logo concepts. - Page 2

Staur · 04-03-2008, 03:46 AM

Finaly I get to see them

and wow they are nice.. I must say I liked the first on both logos,
http://i28.tinypic.com/wbup3b.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2mpjz4h.jpg

P.s At first I tought that it said "luv porn" hehe, nice sales pitch

aschooley · 04-03-2008, 09:51 AM

haha. im going to try and work on that cause I noticed that too sometimes. but thanks for letting me know what you thought!

Aarlev · 04-03-2008, 10:48 AM

Nice logos. But yeah I saw luvporn at first glance as well

yellowcake · 04-03-2008, 11:07 AM

Lol I saw it luvpom because it reminds me on an Indonesian word "bom" which is actually means bomb.

I agree with you. I like the first one too

alyCe · 04-04-2008, 07:16 AM

Cool concepts ^^ How would these look on a white background?

aschooley · 04-04-2008, 04:52 PM

ive been trying to fix them to work on a white background cause the "Luv" and "Geno's" are obviously in white. i was thinking maybe just adding a black stroke to the words or something like that.

cityofangels · 04-07-2008, 04:03 PM

I really like both designs but I'm not sure they really express the companies enough.

The first one i read a luvbom because your graphic looks like a bomb and i thought the 2nd logo was a childs nursery as your graphic looks like a playhouse.

You may want to experiment some more so that viewers dont get the wrong message from the logo.

On another note that font in the 2nd logo is brilliant, could i ask what font it is?

aschooley · 04-07-2008, 07:09 PM

yeah i know what you're saying. i've been creating a few more concepts so i'll put those up when i'm finished.

the font is actually the same in both logos. it's called Asenine.

thanks for the input!

Designiac · 04-09-2008, 11:05 AM

You do have potential

Maybe you could make the white text bold for people to remember it more likely? Just an idea

04-03-2008, 03:46 AM	#11
Staur Junior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 209	Finaly I get to see them and wow they are nice.. I must say I liked the first on both logos, http://i28.tinypic.com/wbup3b.jpg http://i28.tinypic.com/2mpjz4h.jpg P.s At first I tought that it said "luv porn" hehe, nice sales pitch __________________ Peace

04-03-2008, 10:48 AM	#13
Aarlev Web Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 311	Nice logos. But yeah I saw luvporn at first glance as well __________________ //PORTFOLIO\\

04-04-2008, 07:16 AM	#15
alyCe sans-serif Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 480	Cool concepts ^^ How would these look on a white background? __________________ When in doubt, wink, peace and pout

04-09-2008, 11:05 AM	#19
Designiac Designiac Studios Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Denmark Posts: 7	You do have potential Maybe you could make the white text bold for people to remember it more likely? Just an idea __________________

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04-03-2008, 09:51 AM	#12
aschooley Intern Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 8	haha. im going to try and work on that cause I noticed that too sometimes. but thanks for letting me know what you thought!

04-03-2008, 11:07 AM	#14
yellowcake Intern Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 5	Lol I saw it luvpom because it reminds me on an Indonesian word "bom" which is actually means bomb. I agree with you. I like the first one too

04-04-2008, 04:52 PM	#16
aschooley Intern Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 8	ive been trying to fix them to work on a white background cause the "Luv" and "Geno's" are obviously in white. i was thinking maybe just adding a black stroke to the words or something like that.

04-07-2008, 04:03 PM	#17
cityofangels Intern Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 24	I really like both designs but I'm not sure they really express the companies enough. The first one i read a luvbom because your graphic looks like a bomb and i thought the 2nd logo was a childs nursery as your graphic looks like a playhouse. You may want to experiment some more so that viewers dont get the wrong message from the logo. On another note that font in the 2nd logo is brilliant, could i ask what font it is?

04-07-2008, 07:09 PM	#18
aschooley Intern Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 8	yeah i know what you're saying. i've been creating a few more concepts so i'll put those up when i'm finished. the font is actually the same in both logos. it's called Asenine. thanks for the input!