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Old 04-01-2008, 10:29 PM   #1
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Default first time logo concepts.

I'm pretty new to the world of graphic design but I've been interested in it for quite awhile and have done everything I can to self teach myself. Im currently working for a close friend and he wanted me to try and see if I could create a logo for his company. Just wanting some constructive criticism. here they are:




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Old 04-01-2008, 10:49 PM   #2
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Hey not sure they are showing up try lining them again and we will take a look!
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Old 04-02-2008, 01:25 AM   #3
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here are the links. hopefully they work.

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Old 04-02-2008, 03:44 AM   #4
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I'm not able to see them.. please re-post
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Old 04-02-2008, 04:26 AM   #5
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what kind of company/companies are these?
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Old 04-02-2008, 08:37 AM   #6
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LuvPom is a pomegranate juice company. And Geno's Nursery is the nursery that supplies the plants and such. they also are big in wine.


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Old 04-02-2008, 11:16 AM   #7
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I still cant see them or some reason. Make sure you converted them to RGB if they were CMYK and try using www.tinypic.com to upload them.
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Old 04-02-2008, 05:45 PM   #8
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it was in cmyk so i converted them. theres also an alternate of each where i added another part to the shape.

LuvPom:
http://i28.tinypic.com/wbup3b.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/6zr9fo.jpg


Geno's Nursery:
http://i28.tinypic.com/2mpjz4h.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/296n8s6.jpg



hopefully this works. haha.
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Old 04-02-2008, 09:52 PM   #9
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It worked this time. I think hey are a good start but I would like to see more logo explorations.

I think the nursery symbol looks a bit like an arrow rather then a tree which is what I assume it should be. Id pull up the corners of the tree and also try some different types of looking trees.
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Old 04-02-2008, 10:24 PM   #10
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awesome! thanks for taking the time to check them out. i'll definetly mess around with them more.
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