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Old 04-09-2008, 08:49 PM   #1
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Default Passion Berry logo

This is a new logo that I made for a yogurt store. Feedbacks are very welcomed. Thanks
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Old 04-09-2008, 11:07 PM   #2
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Good start, not sure about the stroke though around the yellow. Also make it small and see if u can make out the berries ok.
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Old 04-10-2008, 10:00 AM   #3
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I agree with Gino, it is a very good start. I also don't know about the stroke on the word passion. I love the idea of the strawberry in the shape of a heart though, that is very clever. I wonder what it would look like if you gave that more emphasis.
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Old 04-10-2008, 02:15 PM   #4
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Default Passion Berry - part 2

Alright, I revised the logo a bit. Also made a new one. Thanks for the feedbacks


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Old 04-10-2008, 03:52 PM   #5
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The new one is clearly better in my opinion.
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Old 04-10-2008, 06:21 PM   #6
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I like the #2 the best, but maybe try the "berry" font from the first one, just a thought. or maybe play around with some fonts, Im not a big fan of the #2 font, but it looks kinda nice in this logo..
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Old 04-12-2008, 10:50 AM   #7
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Really like the colors in #1 but I'd choose if you'd go with the berry over the I or as the O, especially since they are so close it gets abit crowded
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Old 04-14-2008, 12:43 AM   #8
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Personally, I think that #1 is the best. You should leave it as is. It really tells me what the company is and how they feel to a certain extent. #2 doesnt. #2 is boring i think

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Old 04-17-2008, 05:11 AM   #9
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Hi,

I think logo 2 is far superior to the first.

It stands out so much more and looks far neater. It just looks more professional.

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Old 04-17-2008, 07:17 PM   #10
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i agree the second logo of the 2 is verry nice good job!
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