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Old 04-15-2008, 07:49 AM   #1
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Hi Guys,

I worked on a design for a corporate training company. The logo they have got is just black with inclined text like we can see in the design.

I thought of keeping the design simple and a little less colorful so as to maintain the significance of the logo.

Would like to know your views on this.

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Old 04-15-2008, 10:09 AM   #2
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Very web 2.0 with the layout and pink-tinted-off-white-something-background, but looks nice!!
Two questions though:
1)Whats supposed to go in the "flash area"?
2)Their logo, is that the black-on-white, four lines diagonal text-thing? It looks a bit.... off
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Old 04-15-2008, 10:43 AM   #3
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1. In the flash area I have to put a Flash movie.

2. Exactly thats what I have been thinking. I don't even want to call it a logo actually ...but have to since the "client" says so.
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Old 04-23-2008, 10:51 AM   #4
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way to keep it simple, agreed - very 2.0, nice work
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Old 04-23-2008, 08:34 PM   #5
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Very nice! I think the white header area feels a little incomplete though.
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Old 04-24-2008, 05:14 AM   #6
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I'm not saying it's a rip but the design is very similar to http://www.stockvault.net/ But yeah almost everything has been done before .

It's nice nevertheless. As mentioned before the header looks incomplete. Not your fault though. It's so annoying when you have a bad assets to work with.
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Old 04-24-2008, 09:29 AM   #7
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Meh.

@Aarlev: It looks somewhat like it, but as you said, everything has been done before. However, it has its own spin and looks a bit different.

The colors look kind of weird and the logo is off seeing as it is spaced out words tilted...

The design is nice but it looks "oldschool" to me.

Ask me if you need further clarification of my comments.

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