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Old 04-16-2008, 05:09 AM   #1
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I am trying to create a new logo for myself. I am not a graphic designer so not too sure about the technical side. I just put things together that I think look ok. I am a web designer though. The let know what you think.
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Old 04-16-2008, 09:30 AM   #2
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First of all, the second one is too confusing, I noticed that right off the bat. The first one, I believe, has potential. However, it looks too "slapped" together like many of my earlier pieces. Try having less of that white space on top. (in between the big D and the word web) Wait for other people's comments because I am sure they will give you more useful information!

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Yeah, I know what you mean about the white space could do with something putting in there or moving the 'design' into that gap and move 'web' down the side. dont know what that would look like????
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Old 04-16-2008, 03:44 PM   #4
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Yeah, I know what you mean about the white space could do with something putting in there or moving the 'design' into that gap and move 'web' down the side. dont know what that would look like????
Try it out to see what it would look like!

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Old 04-16-2008, 09:35 PM   #5
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I would keep working with the first one and just trying out more combinations and fonts to see which works best, just lots of trial and error. Good job so far!
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I have changed the wording round. looks ok. will upload it up in a bit. Thanks for the comments.
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Old 04-17-2008, 02:40 AM   #7
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for some reason it wont let me link to my image. so here is the path

http://www.dreweswebdesign.co.uk/ima...ns/logo2.2.jpg
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you messed up the link :P

here's the correct one hehe

http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk/ima...ns/logo2.2.jpg

looks a bit better but there is still a space. let me think about what you could put in there when i get home. Off to school for now!

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Old 04-17-2008, 12:10 PM   #9
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you messed up the link again, I can't get in..
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that should work

tracked the url down with some thinking ^^

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