check out my vector

Roski · 04-18-2008, 12:15 AM

http://www.o2designz.com/forum/uploa...1208495645.png

Is the cardboard BG good or should I just go with a solid color ?

Of course now that I know how to do the spikey shape I'm going to whore it.

Pick it apart guys.

Staur · 04-18-2008, 02:28 AM

good work,
you need to change the color of the spikey shape thing. remeber the pic you posted when you wanted to learn the spikey shape, well I would do something like he did and put two spikey shapes and ditch to cardboard, i dont think it fits in.
but the vector is a good piece of work, I know that hand can be tricky to make vector, but you made them very well, not perfect, but very well.

alyCe · 04-18-2008, 05:22 AM

Nice done. Like what you've done with the eyes
The only thing I don't like is his mouth and lips, he has... very curvy, very pink, very full lips, and together with the eyelashes he looks like a really butch basketballplayer that is holding up his hands saying "Nooo! No, I'm not wearing makup!! i'm not homosexual!!!".

Sorry

But he looks very feminine especially with the lips, and at the same time very butch because of the shirt, tattoos, hair and muscles.
But you master the vectors well! Good shading and excecution.

chris · 04-18-2008, 09:43 AM

I like it and in contrast to alyCe, I like the open mouth HAH. It adds some flavor to this vector

~chris

Roski · 04-18-2008, 12:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alyCe

Nice done. Like what you've done with the eyes
The only thing I don't like is his mouth and lips, he has... very curvy, very pink, very full lips, and together with the eyelashes he looks like a really butch basketballplayer that is holding up his hands saying "Nooo! No, I'm not wearing makup!! i'm not homosexual!!!".

Sorry

But he looks very feminine especially with the lips, and at the same time very butch because of the shirt, tattoos, hair and muscles.
But you master the vectors well! Good shading and excecution.

Ya I thought that was the first thing ppl would say. He was making this stupid face and his lips were crazy. I couldn't get the color just right so I just stopped tinkering with it. Thats pretty much the color they were but with the brightness of the skin they stand out more. I think i'll ditch the cardboard and try some stuff with the spikey shape.

Roski · 04-19-2008, 12:21 AM

new version

alyCe · 04-19-2008, 05:37 AM

is "Baller" his name, or?

Roski · 04-19-2008, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alyCe

is "Baller" his name, or?

No, just random crap. Should i put his name ?

Staur · 04-19-2008, 02:24 PM

there is no need for it to say baller.. and you should another color on the star things.
but much better than the first one..

Roski · 04-19-2008, 02:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Staur

there is no need for it to say baller.. and you should another color on the star things.
but much better than the first one..

I'm stumped on color. Any recommendations ?

edit: two more versions

04-18-2008, 12:15 AM	#1
Roski Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 47	check out my vector http://www.o2designz.com/forum/uploa...1208495645.png Is the cardboard BG good or should I just go with a solid color ? Of course now that I know how to do the spikey shape I'm going to whore it. Pick it apart guys.

04-18-2008, 02:28 AM	#2
Staur Junior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 162	good work, you need to change the color of the spikey shape thing. remeber the pic you posted when you wanted to learn the spikey shape, well I would do something like he did and put two spikey shapes and ditch to cardboard, i dont think it fits in. but the vector is a good piece of work, I know that hand can be tricky to make vector, but you made them very well, not perfect, but very well. __________________ Peace

04-18-2008, 05:22 AM	#3
alyCe sans-serif Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 390	Nice done. Like what you've done with the eyes The only thing I don't like is his mouth and lips, he has... very curvy, very pink, very full lips, and together with the eyelashes he looks like a really butch basketballplayer that is holding up his hands saying "Nooo! No, I'm not wearing makup!! i'm not homosexual!!!". Sorry But he looks very feminine especially with the lips, and at the same time very butch because of the shirt, tattoos, hair and muscles. But you master the vectors well! Good shading and excecution. __________________ When in doubt, wink, peace and pout

04-18-2008, 09:43 AM	#4
chris Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 330	I like it and in contrast to alyCe, I like the open mouth HAH. It adds some flavor to this vector ~chris __________________ DiP - Designer in Progress :-) Check out my free blog

04-19-2008, 05:37 AM	#7
alyCe sans-serif Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 390	is "Baller" his name, or? __________________ When in doubt, wink, peace and pout


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04-19-2008, 12:21 AM	#6
Roski Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 47	new version

04-19-2008, 02:24 PM	#9
Staur Junior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 162	there is no need for it to say baller.. and you should another color on the star things. but much better than the first one.. __________________ Peace

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