Golf Logo

cgmpowers · 04-19-2008, 06:44 PM

I'd love some comments about these preliminary logos (theses aren't fully done) but wanted to get some early feedback.

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Thanks,
Chris Powers

Roski · 04-19-2008, 08:18 PM

I like the first one but the guy looks a bit stretched.

alyCe · 04-20-2008, 04:53 AM

I think you got a good thing going with the first, with the curve slightly resembling the curve you'd swing a golfclub. I think you should incorporate it more though, either so you see it's the curve of the swing or maybe incorporate it into the typography (if you look, the curve stops, then carries on with the 9). I'd also work abit more on the typography, but I guess you're not really done with that yet so

Good luck anyhoo and keep us updated!

Hollowell · 04-20-2008, 05:25 AM

The first one is my favorite as of the resons alyCe said.
Since it is a work in progress it is heading the right way i think.
Some small details that you probably will work out.
Looking forward to se the next version.

Gino · 04-20-2008, 02:22 PM

I like the first one but I would simplify it. Maybe fill in the guy so he is all black and make it a bit more realistic looking. Then work on the swoosh to see if you can integrate it into the person and text more so they don't all feel so separate.

04-19-2008, 06:44 PM	#1
cgmpowers Intern Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 6	Golf Logo I'd love some comments about these preliminary logos (theses aren't fully done) but wanted to get some early feedback. 1 2 3 Thanks, Chris Powers

04-20-2008, 04:53 AM	#3
alyCe sans-serif Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 390	I think you got a good thing going with the first, with the curve slightly resembling the curve you'd swing a golfclub. I think you should incorporate it more though, either so you see it's the curve of the swing or maybe incorporate it into the typography (if you look, the curve stops, then carries on with the 9). I'd also work abit more on the typography, but I guess you're not really done with that yet so Good luck anyhoo and keep us updated! __________________ When in doubt, wink, peace and pout

04-20-2008, 02:22 PM	#5
Gino Administrator/Founder Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 789	I like the first one but I would simplify it. Maybe fill in the guy so he is all black and make it a bit more realistic looking. Then work on the swoosh to see if you can integrate it into the person and text more so they don't all feel so separate. __________________ CORPORATE IDENTITY CREATION //GRAPHIC DESIGN BLOG // T SHIRT BLOG

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04-19-2008, 08:18 PM	#2
Roski Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 47	I like the first one but the guy looks a bit stretched.

04-20-2008, 05:25 AM	#4
Hollowell Intern Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 10	The first one is my favorite as of the resons alyCe said. Since it is a work in progress it is heading the right way i think. Some small details that you probably will work out. Looking forward to se the next version.