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Old 04-25-2008, 10:26 AM   #1
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I've been working on this for a few months now and I think it's finished. I was thinking about maybe scanning in one of my graffiti sketches and blend it in but I'm not sure. I never know when a piece is done hehe. Anyways it's a tribute to Afrika Bambaataa. One of the originators of Hip Hop culture. Images are my own, except for the one of Bambaataa himself , which I've gotten permission to use by a photographer. Lighting, brushes etc are done in Photoshop and the typo is created in Illustrator. Hope you like it.


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Old 04-25-2008, 11:58 AM   #2
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Looks amazing overall, not sure im 100 percent sold on the font though.
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Old 04-25-2008, 12:05 PM   #3
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Yeah it's not really there is it? It needs more "umpf" or something Maybe I'll just hand draw the letters in a graffiti style and then jazz them up in Illustrator. Thanks for your input Gino.
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Old 04-25-2008, 01:16 PM   #4
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agree with Gino, change the font. maybe it would be better with 3 different buildings insted of the one 3 times..
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looking good man. Nice flow of colors
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