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Old 05-01-2008, 09:56 PM   #1
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For my portfolio. I've been working on it when I get the time, but now I don't have Photoshop or Illustrator anymore, so I am at a standstill. Anyway, here it is:

www.jordosplace.com/studio/mike/portfolio.html

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1. The Identity divider does not match.
2. The flash animations do not have a pre-loader.
3. The URL is ugly, but is only temporary.
4. My photos are only sub-par. I'm working on that

Thanks guys!
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Old 05-02-2008, 12:10 AM   #2
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Well besides that one divider error, I think it looks pretty nice. Flashy, yet it really gets to me. I don't know how to put it. The color choice looks nice in my opinion. Hopefully you get PS and AI soon. I just downloaded the free trial of AI today myself. Looks like I am going to be having a lot of fun for the next 30 days!

Keep it up!

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Old 05-02-2008, 04:44 AM   #3
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On the contact link, forward to a page with the contact details maybe ( really really annoys some pople when a outlook box opens ) other than that... good work!
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Old 05-02-2008, 03:25 PM   #4
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I think it looks great so far im just not sure about all the coming soon stuff. I think id rather just see finished projects, maybe a few coming soons.
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Old 05-02-2008, 07:47 PM   #5
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Thanks for all the tips guys. I took all the suggestions into consideration, and have fixed most of it. I'm still looking for an effective way to crop some stuff and re-do the divider without photoshop. Ill get around to it sometime. Thanks a ton guys!
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Old 05-04-2008, 05:30 AM   #6
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Looks nice!! Very nice, like the colours and everything, only one thing that bugs me. When I click on a picture, I see it large, and then I'm kinda stuck with it until I press the back button. You should have a "back" button that takes you back to the portfoliopage, or preferably a "next" and "back" button, so navigation will be easier
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