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Old 05-06-2008, 12:43 AM   #1
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this is what i have so far. please leave your input
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Old 05-06-2008, 05:25 AM   #2
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nice decks. stanton rock for scratching. i used to have some stantons

looks cool, i'm not a great lover of the lens flare tool, maybe some other styled lighting?

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Old 05-06-2008, 08:56 AM   #3
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Too me the stanton on the side just looks slapped on with a C4D under/next to it.

Try and get the different aspects to flow better together.

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yea thanks im still working on it
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Old 05-06-2008, 09:44 AM   #5
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Looks awesome far far. I'd like to see the green deck in the middle have more of the focus.
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green deck? what do you mean?
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the middle turntable which is blue/green
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ill have to fix everything when i get from school lol
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Old 05-06-2008, 10:49 AM   #9
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nice decks. stanton rock for scratching. i used to have some stantons

looks cool, i'm not a great lover of the lens flare tool, maybe some other styled lighting?

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you trying to tell me lens-flare isn't instant kewl? :P

and I like it, I only got one tiny wee problem, and that is the fact that it looks like the grey player is on its way to eating the bluish one And it's abit off-balance, either add a whole lot of shit or reduce it :P
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Old 05-06-2008, 05:50 PM   #10
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will do im home now so ima work on it
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