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05-07-2008, 12:38 AM
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Junior Designer
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after your suggestions
 what do you think
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05-07-2008, 12:52 AM
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Administrator/Founder
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: NYC
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Wow much better!!!
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05-07-2008, 12:55 AM
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Junior Designer
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i know thanks for the tips it helped =]
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05-07-2008, 03:10 AM
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Ardcor Massive
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: London UK
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not too keen ont he right top dissolved blue/green area. maybe its just me????
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05-07-2008, 05:48 AM
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Bill Bailey for President
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: London
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Blasphemy! Technics 1200's all the way!
 No it's cool, but I would try to mess around with some different lighting. And the top right green thing ruins the composition imo. Maybe try to position the deck in the center further towards the corner for better flow. Rule of thirds and all that jazz..
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05-07-2008, 06:02 AM
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Ardcor Massive
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: London UK
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lol 1210s
 Best deck EVER
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05-08-2008, 05:21 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Apr 2008
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As with the other suggestions, I would try toning down the opacity on the lower deck. Not very much, but enough to give more emphasis on the green one.
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05-08-2008, 06:17 PM
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Junior Designer
Join Date: Apr 2008
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o ok ill do that right now
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