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Old 05-08-2008, 07:44 PM   #1
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this is a fun little thing i did for an assignment
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Old 05-08-2008, 07:51 PM   #2
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Cool idea! I think it might help if you turned the opacity to 100% or did something to the color didnt layover like that. Nice job though.
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the opacity is like that is because we were trying to imitate another style that an illustrator uses "Peter Sinclair". He does a lot of transparency looking paper stuff like that.
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Old 05-08-2008, 07:56 PM   #4
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ah, ok. Nice job then! It looks good, but it's just not my style.
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Old 05-08-2008, 08:13 PM   #5
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kinda creepy
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Old 05-08-2008, 08:15 PM   #6
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it was for an editorial and the story was about how this guy was cooking in a kitchen when he had a kitchen fire and the only thing in reach to put it out with was a pair of his grandmas underpants
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Old 05-08-2008, 08:18 PM   #7
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lol thats funny
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Old 05-09-2008, 07:46 AM   #8
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haha nice style
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I like it. Looks cartoony but it is pretty cool.

Nice job and stay active!

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Old 05-09-2008, 01:01 PM   #10
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How was this made it almost looks like cut out material scanned in or was this done in photoshop or illustrator?
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