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05-18-2008, 05:55 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
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My Website Ad
 This can be seen at my homepage... Yes, my website sucks, but I figured this is a good way to get my hands into web design and how marketing works and such. Anyway, what do you think of this design? All bashes, put-downs, etc. will be completely accepted as constructive criticism! Thanks all!
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05-18-2008, 06:11 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: San Jose, CA
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Cool concept man!
The only thing that strikes me as weird as the lone "i" colored green. Makes it look strange. I dunno. Other than that. Nice piece. ~chris |
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05-18-2008, 06:20 PM
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05-18-2008, 06:21 PM
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Art student
Join Date: May 2008
Location: California
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That is sweet man!
I love the idea haha. Yeah the lone "i" gets me to. maybe in click to open you should have 1 letter of each color
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05-18-2008, 06:24 PM
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05-18-2008, 06:26 PM
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Art student
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Location: California
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Haha :]
just a suggestion! poor "i"
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05-18-2008, 08:31 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 419
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i say if you want to add color make click all green then just having the i green... cause the i is lonely and needs friends. lol
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05-20-2008, 09:33 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
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Color and creativity are amazing!
 One suggestion, change the font. It just throws off the whole ad. I would suggest something more thick, boxy, y'know? |
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05-21-2008, 01:26 AM
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Designer
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 67
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Thank you all for the suggestions! I've been working a bit on it and coming up with some better looking fonts and colors for it!
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06-04-2008, 12:53 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Jun 2008
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I LOVE that concept! Amazing creativity!
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