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Old 05-19-2008, 01:32 AM   #1
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Hey guys, young, freelance designer from Pittsburgh here!
After browsing through a bunch of the the threads here,
I'd definately say that my style is alot different from most
on here, so I'm a little out of place, so don't be too harsh!
Haha. Here are a few pieces I've done over the past 2 weeks

NOTE: These are all flyers, and alot of people get confused
with the way I design them. When I make a flyer I design
it as 1 image, so when it's cut, it blends very well. So when
looking at the image, the left side is front, right is back. So
When looking imagine a line in the middle, haha.













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Old 05-19-2008, 07:54 AM   #2
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Nice work man. I'm seeing a few areas where you can work on blending people into the designs better. Other than that though, pretty cool. Do you have anything other than flyers to show?

Edit: Didn't realize you posted this in the critique section So I'm going to critique.

I'd work on your typography some. I know you have to fit a lot of information on these, but a lot of the type is really tight and kind of hard to read. And again with the blending. Seems like a lot of the "models" have too much of a feathered edge and some unnatural looking shadows.

You should take pictures of some of these printed and post it.
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Old 05-19-2008, 01:02 PM   #3
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Great flyers, i think you have got this style down pat!
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Old 05-28-2008, 04:10 PM   #4
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love these flyers. great style
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