need advice on layout

perini_1 · 05-31-2008, 01:19 PM

im not a professional just a student seeking help.

i know it is small, the attachment, but i just don't know how to post an image without having a url.

Gino · 05-31-2008, 04:36 PM

I would say you need to work on the hierarchy of text. The text is kind of all over the place. I would recommend 3 spots. A big title, then a second area for other important information such a dates and highlights of the event and a 3rd spot for less important information such as logos, extended information, ticket prices.

neographique · 06-05-2008, 04:01 AM

It's really nearly impossible to critique if I don't know the subject matter or context. I will say though that, as a rule of thumb you want to limit the ammount of fonts you use on a flyer poster to no more than 2 or 3 at the most. And changing colors within the same line of type is a slippery slope.

For images, aim for profound or understated. try to say as much as you can with as little as possible. The more elements you add to a page , the more your information is lost. This is true with virtually all design regardless of media/dicipline.

Go for bold, simple and striking, or minimal and understated. See how that works for you.

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06-05-2008, 04:01 AM	#3
neographique Intern Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: San Francisco Posts: 9	It's really nearly impossible to critique if I don't know the subject matter or context. I will say though that, as a rule of thumb you want to limit the ammount of fonts you use on a flyer poster to no more than 2 or 3 at the most. And changing colors within the same line of type is a slippery slope. For images, aim for profound or understated. try to say as much as you can with as little as possible. The more elements you add to a page , the more your information is lost. This is true with virtually all design regardless of media/dicipline. Go for bold, simple and striking, or minimal and understated. See how that works for you.