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02-26-2008, 02:27 PM
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Web Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: London
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Silencio
Finished this a few days ago..I'm not really sure on the typo. Let me know what you think.
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02-26-2008, 03:09 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Norway
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looks good, what is it for?
Typo looks good, its the background I would tried something else with, maybe peace |
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02-26-2008, 03:45 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Denmark
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Looks great, I wouldn't change a thing.
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02-27-2008, 07:14 AM
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Football geek
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Oslo, Norway
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Amazing. Great work. Agree with David. No need for changes.
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02-29-2008, 11:47 AM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Oslo, Norway
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Im not feeling the hair, the bits are too "glued" together, not floating as hair should be. I know how hard it is to try and cut out hair in a natural way, it sucks. But that's the only thing I can point my finger at; I like the typography and the colors. Im a sucker for mixing "ornate" capital letters with sans-serif fonts.
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02-29-2008, 12:34 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
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The only that I would change is the ++++ under silencio other than that great stuff
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02-29-2008, 03:26 PM
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Designer/Copywriter
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: DePere, WI
Posts: 93
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Visually it's great . . . I completely agree about the ornate/sans mix--well done.
This may or may not be relevant to the project goals, but the image itself doesn't say "Silencio" to me--it's more like an explosion of color & bright bits. Is there a less obvious message I'm not getting? |
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02-29-2008, 03:28 PM
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Web Designer
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: London
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Quote:
Will try and cut her hair out better.@UpandUp: Yeah, not really sure about those. I just wanted some pink there to contrast the white as it looked a bit empty with just the text. Will try some different things. Thanks for your input guys, much appreciated!
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02-29-2008, 05:50 PM
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Senior Designer
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Oslo, Norway
Posts: 264
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Ther's alot of things you can replace the + with. A dashed line ----, a dotted line ...., a whole line ____, a double whole line ==== (uhm, just whole, yaknow). I understand and like the pink, it gives a good balance and "lands" the text.
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02-29-2008, 08:52 PM
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Designer
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Toronto, ON, Canada
Posts: 80
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I think a continuation of the the pink on right side would be good or pink stars with that glam feel
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