bad moon Very bad moon

BABYDIABOLICAL · 03-17-2008, 06:14 PM

I left the bad man rough because it makes him more creepy to me . I would like some feed back about that please. I am going to go ahead and make a confession here ...I use Microsoft digital Image Suites...there I said it! And furthermore ,I don't like Photoshop . I am sorry for the graphic blasphemy ,but it's the truth.

alyCe · 03-17-2008, 06:28 PM

Wow, that is creepy indeed!!

Staur · 03-17-2008, 06:31 PM

Hi BABYDIABOLICAL

I must say, I dont get this design, ok there is a nude man and a little girl.

what it this for, just for fun??.. I feel like I need some info, before I can give critique to this (I know you posted it in the showcase file). And you need a focus piont, in this everything is blury. But I am a fan of the 60-80's photo style that you have used in this.

but yes, creepy

Gino · 03-17-2008, 09:07 PM

It means don't go outside at night if its a full moon, thats when the crazy people come out AHHHHHH!

BABYDIABOLICAL · 03-18-2008, 01:30 AM

A friend of mine wanted something to go with his poem Luna . The blur just made it feel more cohesive to me .I have only been at this for about 6 months and am still very much learning,and I appreciate all feedback even if it's not all rave reviews. Here is the poem ...it's kinda a show of your vocabulary kind of thing. I probably should have posted in the critique section...oops!

Luna

Ancient Mother's uncertain light, shines in the skyes tonight---her gentle nature unsettled, something doesnt feel quite right.
Looking down upon man-kind's folly, Moon cringes as she blushes---vermilion glow illuminates, first kisses spawning youthful crushes.
Such goings on...they should amuse her, aether's chill invading---benevolent intentions deserting her, good will suddenly fading...
Fully shining scarlet now, falling prey to evil's lure---dark urges are ascendant, desperation and chaos the only cure.

Kisses turning bitter now, young lovers somehow soiled---the moment's passion deserting them, Mother's evil serpent coiled.
Passion's steaming nature changes, seen in this awful light---such pleasures derived from love's embrace, are not to be tonight.
The wise now hasten to their houses, such light observed before---memory vomits debauched images, remembrance shakes their very core.
Couples absorbed within their passion, ignore such subtle changes---Mother's light prohibits thought, as she silently arranges...

Infernal acts and practices, madness walks the streets---tenderness and compassion lost, all coherence now retreats.
Virgin-blood upon the cobblestones, screaming desperately for revenge---mankind's callous nature struts, to late to make amends.
Foul violence and lusting grows, couples rutting where they lay---enjoyment not a part of this, crimson moonlight orchestrates this display.
Panting innocents look around themselves, waning Moon deserts the skye---wretched wailing fills the air, leaving men to wonder why.

Continuing her endless journey, Mother moves towards western reaches-----
Un-caring in her lofty dwelling, immune to what her reflection teaches.

© January, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved

Staur · 03-18-2008, 04:06 AM

Im not much of an poem reader but i know that poems can be abstract, so then you can justify having the blur, and that its kinda abstract.. I do like Gino's interpretation of it

alyCe · 03-18-2008, 05:32 AM

Oh, and what's/who's swordmaker?

BABYDIABOLICAL · 03-20-2008, 09:22 AM

Gino's interpretation is spot on . That is what I was going for . Swordmaker is my name ... I have already decided that its to large and seven different kinds of wrong on there .I just haven't changed it . What I have noticed most about the work you guys produce and what I do is that mine have a lot of clean up left and yours are all clean and finished .I tend to get excited twords the end of a project and rush through the finishing up details.

03-17-2008, 06:14 PM	#1
BABYDIABOLICAL Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 48	bad moon Very bad moon I left the bad man rough because it makes him more creepy to me . I would like some feed back about that please. I am going to go ahead and make a confession here ...I use Microsoft digital Image Suites...there I said it! And furthermore ,I don't like Photoshop . I am sorry for the graphic blasphemy ,but it's the truth.

03-17-2008, 06:28 PM	#2
alyCe Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Norway Posts: 693	Wow, that is creepy indeed!! __________________ everyone runs, nobody hides

03-17-2008, 06:31 PM	#3
Staur Senior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 255	Hi BABYDIABOLICAL I must say, I dont get this design, ok there is a nude man and a little girl. what it this for, just for fun??.. I feel like I need some info, before I can give critique to this (I know you posted it in the showcase file). And you need a focus piont, in this everything is blury. But I am a fan of the 60-80's photo style that you have used in this. but yes, creepy __________________ Peace

03-17-2008, 09:07 PM	#4
Gino Administrator/Founder Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 1,036	It means don't go outside at night if its a full moon, thats when the crazy people come out AHHHHHH! __________________ Free Business Cards // T Shirts Blog // How to Start A Clothing Line

03-18-2008, 01:30 AM	#5
BABYDIABOLICAL Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 48	moon A friend of mine wanted something to go with his poem Luna . The blur just made it feel more cohesive to me .I have only been at this for about 6 months and am still very much learning,and I appreciate all feedback even if it's not all rave reviews. Here is the poem ...it's kinda a show of your vocabulary kind of thing. I probably should have posted in the critique section...oops! Luna Ancient Mother's uncertain light, shines in the skyes tonight---her gentle nature unsettled, something doesnt feel quite right. Looking down upon man-kind's folly, Moon cringes as she blushes---vermilion glow illuminates, first kisses spawning youthful crushes. Such goings on...they should amuse her, aether's chill invading---benevolent intentions deserting her, good will suddenly fading... Fully shining scarlet now, falling prey to evil's lure---dark urges are ascendant, desperation and chaos the only cure. Kisses turning bitter now, young lovers somehow soiled---the moment's passion deserting them, Mother's evil serpent coiled. Passion's steaming nature changes, seen in this awful light---such pleasures derived from love's embrace, are not to be tonight. The wise now hasten to their houses, such light observed before---memory vomits debauched images, remembrance shakes their very core. Couples absorbed within their passion, ignore such subtle changes---Mother's light prohibits thought, as she silently arranges... Infernal acts and practices, madness walks the streets---tenderness and compassion lost, all coherence now retreats. Virgin-blood upon the cobblestones, screaming desperately for revenge---mankind's callous nature struts, to late to make amends. Foul violence and lusting grows, couples rutting where they lay---enjoyment not a part of this, crimson moonlight orchestrates this display. Panting innocents look around themselves, waning Moon deserts the skye---wretched wailing fills the air, leaving men to wonder why. Continuing her endless journey, Mother moves towards western reaches----- Un-caring in her lofty dwelling, immune to what her reflection teaches. © January, 2008 ~DaveDoom51~ all rights reserved Last edited by BABYDIABOLICAL : 03-18-2008 at 01:34 AM.


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03-18-2008, 04:06 AM	#6
Staur Senior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 255	Im not much of an poem reader but i know that poems can be abstract, so then you can justify having the blur, and that its kinda abstract.. I do like Gino's interpretation of it __________________ Peace

03-18-2008, 05:32 AM	#7
alyCe Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Norway Posts: 693	Oh, and what's/who's swordmaker? __________________ everyone runs, nobody hides

03-20-2008, 09:22 AM	#8
BABYDIABOLICAL Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 48	Gino's interpretation is spot on . That is what I was going for . Swordmaker is my name ... I have already decided that its to large and seven different kinds of wrong on there .I just haven't changed it . What I have noticed most about the work you guys produce and what I do is that mine have a lot of clean up left and yours are all clean and finished .I tend to get excited twords the end of a project and rush through the finishing up details.

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