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roelito · 04-11-2008, 05:46 AM

Hi peps! This my 1st time here, hope we could all be friends. . . Thanks!

aandy · 04-11-2008, 06:46 AM

Hi, Really love the artwork. The Halftone affect is really good.

alyCe · 04-12-2008, 10:46 AM

Personally, it's a bit too tutorialized. Which means you got the skills, but I don't feel you have added something to it, and sadly it ends up abit too generic. The image is warm (/hot), energetic, which you could say the stock-image is too, but actually it doesn't really does that. It's "hot" because it's a retouched nude girl there. Why is she covering up? I think it would be better if she didn't - and you could, if you want cover it up with a glowing line or whatever

Just throwing some thoughts here, it's a nice image but, as I said it misses something to step out of "tutorialized" and up to "individual"

Hope that helps, and welcome to the forum!

Staur · 04-12-2008, 11:10 AM

nice but alyCe is right.. tutorialized

theafroguy · 04-12-2008, 11:20 AM

Hmm. I think the problem here is that here are so many cool effects going on in this picture that they clash and rob it of any sort of personality.

Michae · 04-12-2008, 05:43 PM

I recognise every single brush here.

That's not a good sign.

04-11-2008, 06:46 AM	#2
aandy Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Durham Posts: 40	Hi, Really love the artwork. The Halftone affect is really good. __________________ http://www.drewswebdesign.co.uk

04-12-2008, 10:46 AM	#3
alyCe Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Norway Posts: 665	Personally, it's a bit too tutorialized. Which means you got the skills, but I don't feel you have added something to it, and sadly it ends up abit too generic. The image is warm (/hot), energetic, which you could say the stock-image is too, but actually it doesn't really does that. It's "hot" because it's a retouched nude girl there. Why is she covering up? I think it would be better if she didn't - and you could, if you want cover it up with a glowing line or whatever Just throwing some thoughts here, it's a nice image but, as I said it misses something to step out of "tutorialized" and up to "individual" Hope that helps, and welcome to the forum! __________________ glunge

04-12-2008, 11:10 AM	#4
Staur Senior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Norway Posts: 255	nice but alyCe is right.. tutorialized __________________ Peace

04-12-2008, 05:43 PM	#6
Michae Senior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 283	I recognise every single brush here. That's not a good sign. __________________ Warning: I might come across as a bitch, but Im really just trying to help.

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04-12-2008, 11:20 AM	#5
theafroguy Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 26	Hmm. I think the problem here is that here are so many cool effects going on in this picture that they clash and rob it of any sort of personality.