Sapatos

roelito · 04-13-2008, 11:32 PM

Hello friends its me again! Here's my latest design, dunno what to say it's just came in to my idea when I saw the latest trends in Chuck Taylor shoes so I decided to put a title (SAPATOS) which means shoes in Philippine dialect.

BTW tnx for all the comments from my previous design (BurstMeUp) I appreciate what ya'all said to it maybe some of you had commented nicely but for me I just love to design

Thanks Again. Peace!!

chris · 04-14-2008, 12:33 AM

I like it but I think that there are too many brushes used. Just an opening. Other than that, I think the colors go well together and the rainbow in the background gives the image some "feeling"

Keep up the good work!

~chris

theafroguy · 04-14-2008, 01:35 PM

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Originally Posted by chris

I like it but I think that there are too many brushes used. Just an opening. Other than that, I think the colors go well together and the rainbow in the background gives the image some "feeling"

I disagree. The colours don't go and the effects are all over the place. Just like your last image, it doesn't seem to have any ideas of its own.

Michae · 04-15-2008, 12:30 PM

Again, this smells tutorial all over the place. The girl doesn' go with the background, the city doesn't work with the "vector"-feeling, the rainbow just remind me of the Coke-adverts... And it doesn't say anything. You need to find out WHAT you're gonna say before you make something...

Aarlev · 04-16-2008, 12:53 PM

Why do you have Abduzeedos logo on your work? Just to give credit for the tutorial you used or?

04-14-2008, 12:33 AM	#2
chris Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 564	I like it but I think that there are too many brushes used. Just an opening. Other than that, I think the colors go well together and the rainbow in the background gives the image some "feeling" Keep up the good work! ~chris __________________ PORTFOLIO // SHIRTS // HOME

04-15-2008, 12:30 PM	#4
Michae Senior Designer Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Oslo, Norway Posts: 283	Again, this smells tutorial all over the place. The girl doesn' go with the background, the city doesn't work with the "vector"-feeling, the rainbow just remind me of the Coke-adverts... And it doesn't say anything. You need to find out WHAT you're gonna say before you make something... __________________ Warning: I might come across as a bitch, but Im really just trying to help.

04-16-2008, 12:53 PM	#5
Aarlev Web Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 341	Why do you have Abduzeedos logo on your work? Just to give credit for the tutorial you used or? __________________ //PORTFOLIO\\

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