Dead Girl Praying

roelito · 04-15-2008, 01:32 AM

Wuzzup all! Just drop some comment in my latest design. Well i fell sad for what i've done with the picture of that little girl. Well its just a design nothin else. PEACE!

chris · 04-15-2008, 10:23 AM

Doesn't flow very well because the colors are all over the place. I don't get the message if there is any.

Try making things "go" with one another. The girl is in black and white and that throws me off.

~chris

Gino · 04-15-2008, 04:53 PM

Great start, but too much going on, maybe keep it all black and white or less colors as Chris said. Also don't think you need the other photo of her that is small.

Aarlev · 04-16-2008, 01:12 PM

I think you have to be careful with all the different styles you're mixing. The title insinuates more of a dark feel. I'd loose the retro stripes and bright colors and go all 'dark style' (ala damnengine etc.) on it to emphasize the concept.

The blood needs work, it looks very unrealistic. The fonts aren't great. There's no atmosphere and the whole thing just looks kind of all over the place at the moment. It seems like you're just trying to show how many different Photoshop effects you can do and forgot about what you were trying to convey with this. Give it some atmosphere, try to work more with the idea and concept and this could turn out really good. Sorry if I'm being harsh but I'm just trying to give constructive criticism.

DannyOutlaw · 04-25-2008, 09:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Gino

Great start, but too much going on, maybe keep it all black and white or less colors as Chris said. Also don't think you need the other photo of her that is small.

I agree. Its a good start but needs work

04-15-2008, 10:23 AM	#2
chris Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: San Jose, CA Posts: 564	Doesn't flow very well because the colors are all over the place. I don't get the message if there is any. Try making things "go" with one another. The girl is in black and white and that throws me off. ~chris __________________ PORTFOLIO // SHIRTS // HOME

04-15-2008, 04:53 PM	#3
Gino Administrator/Founder Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: NYC Posts: 1,034	Great start, but too much going on, maybe keep it all black and white or less colors as Chris said. Also don't think you need the other photo of her that is small. __________________ Free Business Cards // T Shirts Blog // How to Start A Clothing Line

04-16-2008, 01:12 PM	#4
Aarlev Web Designer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: London Posts: 341	I think you have to be careful with all the different styles you're mixing. The title insinuates more of a dark feel. I'd loose the retro stripes and bright colors and go all 'dark style' (ala damnengine etc.) on it to emphasize the concept. The blood needs work, it looks very unrealistic. The fonts aren't great. There's no atmosphere and the whole thing just looks kind of all over the place at the moment. It seems like you're just trying to show how many different Photoshop effects you can do and forgot about what you were trying to convey with this. Give it some atmosphere, try to work more with the idea and concept and this could turn out really good. Sorry if I'm being harsh but I'm just trying to give constructive criticism. __________________ //PORTFOLIO\\

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